ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK/ David McMurray

April 19, 2012

A child asks

if they are real

cherry blossoms . ..

--Rita Odeh (Israel)

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Cherry blossoms--

a butterfly flutters

from my head to hers

--Chen-ou Liu (Canada)

* * *

Between

a new teacher and students--

a butterfly and smile

--Ikuyo Yoshimura (Gifu)

* * *

Between tears

and new love--

my first teacher

--Maria Santomauro (New York)

* * *

Riding a bike

through the shade

cherry blossoms

--Rahadian Tanjung (Indonesia)

* * *

Mountain village

cherry blossoms

lingering snow on the ridge

--Hidehito Yasui (Osaka)

* * *

Dust on a chalkboard

with seeds from Mrs. Moran--

grows to poetry

--Kael T. Smith (Indiana)

* * *

Windowsill sparrow

requesting food to eat

Homeless begging

--Thao Nguyen (Texas)

* * *

Blue bottlenose

clouds hand on the line

’tween sky and sea

--Stephen Le Page (Australia)

* * *

Before sunset

small boy in blue shorts

walks uphill

--Prijono Tjiptoherijanto (Kobe)

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FROM THE NOTEBOOK

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The rushing

of the language

spring wind

--Martina Heinisch (Germany)

The haikuist cautions an excited interlocutor to speak more slowly, to savor every syllable of the conversation. After a shaky experience, Deborah Finkelstein takes her time. Chitra Rajappa invites you to follow her along a colorful path in Bangalore, India.

Slippery ice patch--

learning to trust

again

* * *

Following the footsteps

of the spring breeze--

scattered petals

When writing haiku in Tokyo Hajimu Hirakita looks to the sky for inspiration. Michael Corr scouts southern skies.

The spring sky

the primary teacher

of poetry

* * *

Really here

the love for you in

southern skies

Murasaki Sagano explains to a northern friend that Kyo-sakura is a type of cherry tree that grows in Kyoto. Yukiko Minami watches a train speed past her Kyoto home.

Tokyo friend

her smile within its pink

Kyo-sakura

* * *

Power cable dancing

cherry blossoms waving

Shinkansen window frame

Vasile Moldovan patiently waits in Romania. Ramona Linke describes how a first kiss feels in Germany. J.D. Heskin observes a blushing beauty in Minnesota.

Waiting for

the cherry trees to bloom . ..

a long kiss

* * *

Her first kiss--

the vast heavens

blossom-strewn

* * *

Her red cheeks--

they tend to blossom

in a cool wind

An exchange student from Britain, Gemma Peele, and first-year Sena Ogata pen their first haiku in English. They took part in a “Hanami and Haiku” event during their first week at Seinan Jo Gakuin University in Kita-Kyushu. Sixty classmates in the freshman class were coached by second-year students and teachers on how to compose haiku in English. Mitsuhiro Hashimoto, a professor of English, inspired students to write haiku based on the sound of a shrike. Hidehito Yasui wonders where fallen cherry blossoms go?

Plane landing

in a strange place

teaching blossoms

* * *

Entering this school

everyone is so cute

his face too

* * *

High blue sky

my teacher screeches shrilly

no idea where I am

* * *

Cherry blossoms

rolling petals

going where?

Martin Gottlieb Cohen pens his haiku on one line: a lone breeze through the cherry blossoms twilight.

Hidehito Yasui celebrates the 100th birthday of his mother in Osaka.

Potomac centenary

cherry blossoms

grandmother’s age

Don Hansbrough’s teacher awakes early. Saki Ikeda writes about her English teacher in Kita-Kyushu. Though Teiichi Suzuki once feared his teacher, and the tone of her voice has not changed, he says she is diminutive in size now.

My teacher and I

rising sun and morning star

shining on the world

* * *

Mrs. Tanaka

small woman, small voice

shaking in English

* * *

Deja vu?

once a towering teacher

spring reunion

When Isao Soematsu was a preschooler, his older sister helped him to write, read and do his arithmetic homework. He says he dearly misses her now because “She was called to heaven five years ago.”

The three R’s--

first teachings of

elder sister

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The next issues of the Asahi Haikuist Network appear May 4 and 18. Readers are invited to send haiku about a cabin, hut or cottage on a postcard to David McMurray at the International University of Kagoshima, Sakanoue 8-34-1, Kagoshima, 891-0197, Japan, or e-mail to (mcmurray@fka.att.ne.jp).

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David McMurray has been writing the Asahi Haikuist Network column since April 1995, first for the Asahi Evening News. He is also the editor of OUTREACH, a bi-monthly column featuring international teachers in The Language Teacher of the Japan Association for Language Teacher (JALT).

McMurray is professor of intercultural studies at The International University of Kagoshima where he lectures on international haiku. At the Graduate School he supervises students who research haiku. He is a correspondent school teacher of Haiku in English for the Asahi Culture Center in Tokyo.

McMurray judges haiku contests organized by the Ministry of Foreign Affairs, Asahi Culture Center, Matsuyama City, and Seinan Jo Gakuin University.

McMurray's books include: "Canada Project in Kyushu" Vol. 1 (2006) - Vol. 7 (2011), Pukeko: Fukuoka; "Haiku in English as a Japanese Language" (2003), Pukeko: Kitakyushu; and "Hospital Departmental Operations - A Guide for Trustees and Managers," Canadian Hospital Association: Ottawa, Canada.

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Shidare sakura (cherry tree variety with drooping branches) (Illustration by Mitsuaki Kojima)

Shidare sakura (cherry tree variety with drooping branches) (Illustration by Mitsuaki Kojima)

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