ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK/ David McMurray

June 01, 2012

This was the last train

drops of

early summer rain

--Bernhard Kopf (Austria)

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Morning coffee

with yesterday’s bread

a long rain

--Teichi Suzuki (Osaka)

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The teapot whistles

and seventeen syllables

rise from a spring hut

--Heike Gewi (Norway)

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A robin

drinks from a raindrop

I sip tea

--Caroline Gill (England)

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Rainwater

a snail

on the ramp for the disabled

--Nelly Dobrinova (Bulgaria)

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Composing a sonata:

sixteenth notes and raindrops

splash across my manuscript

--Alicia Hilton (Illinois)

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A song of rain

from every gutter . ..

Lisbon’s light

--Romano Zeraschi (Italy)

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The new cottage

fragrant as fingers touch

perfectly honed wood

--Hidehito Yasui (Osaka)

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Setting sun--

the urge to be washed

by spring rain

--Rita Odeh (Israel)

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After the evening rain

under apple tree blooms

a full moon

--Richard Jodoin (Quebec)

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FROM THE NOTEBOOK

Our bodies’ wild sway

withered lilies

on Santa Clara’s float

--Anne Carly Abad (Philippines)

The haikuist rides a festival float decorated with Easter lilies. A graduate of Ateneo de Manila University, her poetry appears in literary reviews. Motoko Amatsuji goes shopping for flowers in Hyogo Prefecture.

Late cherry blossoms

the flower seller’s

Kyoto dialect

Vo Tuan Hoang Vy peers through a blue-tinted window in Vietnam. The color of the hydrangeas in Teiichi Suzuki’s garden reminds him of the hue of the blue paint selected by the 17th-century Dutch artist Jan Vermeer.

Blue rain

on the tiny pane

the rolling drops

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Hydrangea

shrouded in the rain

Vermeer’s blue

T.D. Ginting and Hidehito Yasui imagine how a rolling river meets the sea.

The sea is waving

and the river is coming--

(be)longing each other

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Rain drops on savanna

the blue Nile

the Mediterranean Sea

Mario Massimo Zontini sniffs at perfumed wind wafting through his hometown of Parma, Italy. Getting away from Tokyo to go camping with his grandchildren is heavenly, writes Hajimu Hirakita.

In spring rain

all drops are scented:

wisteria

* * *

Gardenias

on an old camping map

stars shine

Radostina A. Angelova tiptoes through a puddle in Bulgaria. Ikuyo Yoshimura observes the gentle, yet relentless hand of nature in Gifu Prefecture.

Bubbles in the pool

a pregnant woman

walking in the rain

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Drop, drop, drop--

fresh leaves reflect in rainwater,

melting a sand castle

Abad’s grandmother prays for rain. Twelve-year-old Angelica McCammond is curious about her grandmother.

Grandma taps her fingers

is that a light drizzle

I finally hear?

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Green mountains

the lump on

my granny’s back

From a distance, the landscape scene Valeria Barouch views resembles an indigo ink sketch--black trees in early morning with a smudge of gray smoke from a chimney winding through and blotting out the branches and everything else behind it. Ramona Linke reads a message penned by the wind.

Through black ink branches

the narrow trail rubbed out

by the cabin’s smoke

* * *

Mountain lake

the calligraphy

of the rain

Michael Corr zeroes in on a bird diving near the Olympic Peninsula in Washington State.

Iris white

fish hawk submerged

its pert splash

Maria Santomauro tends cottage garden flowers in New York. Her colorful haiku nestles a home in the romantic, unhurried pace of country life. Charlotte Digregorio wonders what to do with her mother’s garden in Illinois.

Among flowers

and butterflies

country cottage

* * *

After mother’s death . ..

rainwater nurtures

her violet azaleas

Heike Gewi fishes at a cabin in Norway. Craig Steele misses hunting in Pennsylvania. Rainwater cools Ramesh Anand in India. Ralf Broker lies back in bed in Poland.

Brand new car

parked by the old cabin . ..

shrouded in spring mist

* * *

Last look inside

collapsed hunting cabin--

dusty memories

* * *

Inside the hut

an old clay pot . ..

rainwater harvest

* * *

Anniversary

thinking about fixing

the cottage roof

Eager to view a solar eclipse, students ran to school earlier than usual on May 21, notes Satoru Kanematsu. Mario Massimo Zontini peers in the window of his favorite confectioner in Parma, Italy. He has a weakness for pastries called Baci di Dama, literally Lady’s Kisses.

Sun hiding

pupils and teachers

on the roof

* * *

Child’s dreams

in the confectioner’s shop:

lady’s kisses

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The next issues of the Asahi Haikuist Network appear June 15 and 29. Readers are invited to send haiku about summer dreams on a postcard to David McMurray at the International University of Kagoshima, Sakanoue 8-34-1, Kagoshima, 891-0197, Japan, or by e-mail to (mcmurray@fka.att.ne.jp).

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David McMurray has been writing the Asahi Haikuist Network column since April 1995, first for the Asahi Evening News. He is also the editor of OUTREACH, a bi-monthly column featuring international teachers in The Language Teacher of the Japan Association for Language Teacher (JALT).

McMurray is professor of intercultural studies at The International University of Kagoshima where he lectures on international haiku. At the Graduate School he supervises students who research haiku. He is a correspondent school teacher of Haiku in English for the Asahi Culture Center in Tokyo.

McMurray judges haiku contests organized by the Ministry of Foreign Affairs, Asahi Culture Center, Matsuyama City, and Seinan Jo Gakuin University.

McMurray's books include: "Canada Project in Kyushu" Vol. 1 (2006) - Vol. 7 (2011), Pukeko: Fukuoka; "Haiku in English as a Japanese Language" (2003), Pukeko: Kitakyushu; and "Hospital Departmental Operations - A Guide for Trustees and Managers," Canadian Hospital Association: Ottawa, Canada.

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